Friday, 27 November 2009

Amendments to CD cover from audience feedback

Front CD Cover

Back CD Cover

After reading through our audience feedback we made the appropriate amendments to the font as the main reoccurring comment was that our font was not bold enough and didn't necessarily fit the conventions of our indie music genre. This is our new cover.

Tuesday, 24 November 2009

Final Music Video

This is our final music video, we presented it to the class along with our final print products and are awaiting audience feedback so we can make adjustments and improvements. Alot of the concerns with our feedback was the lip synching was out, and both Jordan and I have difficulty in adjusting this however we have tried to fix it to the best of our ability. We also made a few ammedments including adding images of the other girls towards the end of the video to show a connection between them as some felt that our narrative could be clearer. Overall we recived alot of positive feedback from our work.

Final Music Video

Friday, 20 November 2009

CD Cover

Front CD Cover

Back CD Cover


This is our CD cover. We realized that when measuring out the size for our CD cover we needed to crop our photo. When editing we decided that the cover looked best cropped down altogether rather than just reduce in size. The general flow of the cover fits better now and the lighting adds to the natural surroundings of the setting.

Final Myspace

We finalized our Myspace account for our artist Lola Riley. Below are some screen shots from the profile and the link to her page.

http://www.myspace.com/lolariley

Login to Myspace
This is the main log in for Lola Riley, we created a hotmail account for her and set up a joint password so Jordan and I could both contribute to it.

Home profile
This is the account for our artist, which allows us to write blogs, bulletins, upload photos etc and where updates appear.

Artist Profile
We decided to use a floral background for our artists profile to add femininity to her image, however we used pastel colours to show her relaxed and calm attitude and music genre. We also uploaded the soundtrack so viewers of the profile can listen. We contributed to upcoming shows and also wrote influences and an about me that would create our artists persona. We used influences such as Bat for lashes, which is also a strong, empowering female artist. It features her unsigned label to inform potential record companies of her availability.

Pictures uploaded to profile
To create realism, we featured images of the artist out with friends on nights out to show her fun and bubbly side. We just selected images from previous nights out to show she is real and down to earth.

Myspace Blog

Another Myspace blog
We designed blogs to further the realism and create a connection between audiences and the artist. This creates the Uses and gratifications theory as the artist talks about gigs and how the artist feels, letting readers into her life.

Blog for upcoming shows
These are Lola Riley upcoming shows, making it easy for audiences to find out where and when her gigs are.
Dashboard of audiences interested in artists music
We found an application on Myspace which allows the artist to view how many people view their profile, which age rages view it, where they are from in the country etc. This is useful as the artist would be informed of which target audience most commonly views the music so appealing to them would be simple. Also, popular spots in the country means gigs can be arranged.

Upcoming shows within certain areas
The Myspace also features upcoming shows of other artists, therefore our artist could collaborate with certain bands/artists if they were aware of their shows furthering their popularity and promote themselves.


Music forum
Lastly we found a music forum in which artists swap shows, music and can post blogs to each other. This is useful to our artist as artists and bands who have been signed can inform others of their record deals and potential companies to appeal to.

Advertisement for upcoming show

After our audience feedback we decided to change our profile to make it appear more like a music myspace rather than an personal account. We included the album cover and also created an advertisement for an upcoming gig. We decided to delete a lot of the 'About me' as it wasn't really relevant to her music career but rather her personal life.

Filming of our music video

On sunday 8th of november Jordan and I filmed our music video, we had previously checked the weather forecast and it was set to be sunny. However when we arrived and began to film, we found that the tracking on a film dolly was wobbly and shaky because of the uneven pavement. This meant that we couldn't track our artist because the film would be too distorted.
We decided to drive down to the local co-op to pick up some cardboard boxes to lay on the pavement and then use the film dolly over, this proved successful as the footage was then stable and still.
The general filming of the video went okay, taking just over 3 hours however we were taken to a holt because the camera ran out of battery and we had to stop filming with just two scenes to go.

We tried to film during the week however the unpredictable weather kept holding us back, so finally on the following sunday when the weather was sunny again we managed to film our last scenes. Once again we had to collect some cardboard from the local supermarket but managed to film in just over an hour having prepared and learnt from our mistakes the previous week.

Friday, 6 November 2009

CD Cover Draft

Front CD Cover
Back CD Cover
On Wednesdays lesson Jordan and I took our pictures for our draft CD Cover. We used the iconic leather jacket and flowery dress to contrast her tough yet feminine side. Her positioning in central to the frame to connote her dominance and authority.
We decided to flip the album cover around to reinforce her feminist empowerment as she is not promoting her looks on the album cover but her music. Also, by featuring her face on the back audiences pick up the album to try to uncover this enigma surrounding her appearance. Featuring the guitar on the cover indicates her musical talent, furthering her identity to audiences. We also felt that having her back to audiences is more rebellious as its like she doesn't care what people are thinking.

Shooting Schedule

We have completed our storyboard after developing it from our original, realizing that we need it to be more detailed and step by step if we want an accurate plan.
The new storyboard makes the filming process for us easier as it's second by second, informing us at each point we need to record.

We now plan to record the music video in one day as its in a single set location, and our artist is filmed on one continuous path. We also felt that it would be easier to get it all done in one go as the casts hair/makeup and the weather would be the same rather than if it was filmed in separate days.

We also decided as an incentive for our cast that Jordan and I would buy them lunch as it is expected to take up most of the day, and seeing as it's on a sunday it's time taken from their weekend.

Friday, 30 October 2009

Casting Ideas

We decided to get together an all female cast to make the post feminist element in our video much stronger. We decided to use girls from the ages of 17-18 to appeal to our target audience but also say something about the moral in the song and the messages the artist is sending to younger girls.

Lola Riley (Artist): Michelle
Girl number one (On the corner): Laura
Girl number two (By the sign): Alex
Girl number three (On the Box): Angelina
Girl number four (Friend of girl on box): Jordan

We felt that the image/look of all the girls chosen also relfects that of our genre of music from their clothes/hair/makeup. This consists of the following:

Artist
Costume:
  • Flowery dress
  • Leather jacket (iconic)
  • Dark tights
  • Black boots
Make up:
  • Smokey/dark eyes
Hair:
  • Straight/natural
1st Girl
Costume:
  • Man shirt
  • Leggings
  • Boots
Makeup:
  • Eyeliner
  • Lip balm
  • blusher (natural)
Hair:
  • Wavy
2nd girl
Costume:
  • Black dress
  • High heels
Makeup:
  • Dark eyes
  • Light pink lipstick
Hair:
  • Straight
3rd Girl
Costume:
  • Leggings
  • Dark cardigan
  • Boots
Makeup:
  • Natural
Hair:
  • Wavy
4th Girl
Costume:
  • Jeans
  • Cardigan
  • Pumps
  • Tights
Makeup:
  • Light eye make up (mascara and eyeliner)
  • Blusher
  • Lip balm
Hair:
  • Curly
We felt that these elements would conform to the persona we are creating for each woman. The women waiting to be taken out are more glamorous than those who have split up with their boyfriend but each woman's hair and makeup looks quite natural, challenging female beauty. Also the costume is conventional to the indie genre, reinforcing our artists identity to the audience.

Script

Introduction [0-11 seconds]

And I take one step forwards
when you take three steps back. [12-18 secs]
It's not right for you to treat me like that [19-24 secs]
and I called you about an hour ago
but you didnt calls me back, [25-30 secs]
So I left you a comment on myspace
but your internets f**ked up... apparently. [31-37 secs]

But it's alright, yeah,
I'm completely over it. [37-43 secs]
So I'll see you tomorrow night? [44-47 secs]
What? You can't make it? [48-49 secs]
Then I'll see you next weekend,
you can't make it then? [50-55 secs]
So I'll just see you the week after that
yeah baby I'll be waiting right here like a total twit. [56-1.03 secs]

Interlude [1.04-1.14 secs]

And it's about quarter past eight
and I'm waiting round the corner
where you said that we would meet for our date [1.15-1.21 secs]
and I think I'm looking alright.
'cos I'm wearing those jeans that you bought from the States. [1.22-1.27 secs]

Well it's about three hours later
and I'm still standing in the rain, [1.28-1.33 secs]
but it's alright you forgot cos my hair needs
washing anyways... [1.34-1.41 secs]

And it's alright, yeah,
I'm completely over it. [1.41-1.46 secs]
You must have just forgot it was tonight [1.47-1.50 secs]
or you couldn't make it
cos maybe your grandmas ill or something, [1.51-1.56 secs]
or you broke a limb,
got done in by a gang of angry muggers...
or maybe you're just a f**ker... [1.57-2.08 secs]

But it's alright..
I'm completely over it yeah, [2.09-2.13 secs]

Interlude [2.14-2.16 secs]

But it's alright yeah.. [2.17-2.20 secs]
I'm completely over it,
So I'll see you tomorrow night? [2.21-2.25 secs]
what? you can't make it? [2.26-2.28 secs]
then i'll see you next weekend...
oh yeah that's right you're seeing my friend [2.29-2.34 secs]
so I'll just see you the week after that
yeah baby I'll be waiting right here like a total twit. [2.35-2.46 secs]

Yeah... [2.47-2.49 secs]

Yeah... [2.50-3.05 secs]

We decided to get all of the timings for each line of the song to make sure that when planning the music video we have the correct scene with the correct lyrics. We did this to ensure that the video provides anchorage for the lyrics, which was a key convention to our genre of music.

Assessment

How far do your ideas for the music video conform to convention?

During research for our music video, I found that the generic codes and conventions that surround the Independent music genre or ‘Indie’ as its better known are mostly used to create realism for audiences and show musical talent, especially talent playing musical instruments.

After analyzing multiple music videos, I found that the settings are often outdoors, for example city centers, streets, parks. These stock settings are often established with young audiences from working class backgrounds. By this I mean that often young adolescents are found in streets or parks, making it easy for audiences to relate to the setting. Within our music video we are using a large park which follows a path down to small pond. I think that the low key setting will reinforce realism to the audiences, making the artist seem down to earth and genuine. The setting is very natural, suggesting that the artist holds real talent as Indie music doesn’t often contain voice effects or constructed beats its more guitar and drum based.
The artist is going to feature in the video wearing leggings, blazers, plain vests etc which is very simple yet a reflection of a young generations fashion at the moment. Often, Independent artists will create their own style which has generated to conform to a genre of its own, known as ‘Indie’ fashion sense. The artist will be iconic to the genre of music through the stereotypical categorization of people based on their clothes making it easier for audiences to associate the music of genre with the artist.

We decided to feature the solo female artist in the video using a narrative structure following a break up. We found in most independent videos the artist follows a linear narrative structure often facing an issue to do with the opposite sex or a night out. The disruption directly affects the artist however they always appear as the hero in the new equilibrium. We felt flashbacks were the most appropriate way to get across the break up, as they are also featured in a maroon 5 video, and it demonstrates the narrative clearly. We felt that the flashbacks should be in black and white as it shows the time difference better and also helps portray the artist’s emotions, which is important to push the narrative along.
The lighting of the video is going to be high key as it creates realism for audiences, and this is an important aspect of Indie music as it demonstrates ‘real’ music to fans. Indie music often features artists playing guitars giving them an edge. We felt that the best way to give our artist an edge would be to challenge stereotypical views of women being weak and vulnerable and make our artist a dominating and powerful woman, however with a cheeky side that most Independent artists seem to hold. They show this through smiles and winks. The camera angles most often used in the videos are close ups to really show emotion and facial expression and long shots to establish setting. Our video will contain multiple long shots to establish the path in the park but also close ups to portray the artist’s emotion. This is important because our choice of song and the narrative structure is about an emotional subject.

Lastly, some of the main iconography expected within an indie music video is alcohol, cigarettes and musical instruments. We felt it was hard to incorporate these with a female artist as you don’t often see the artist drinking or smoking but being surrounded by people doing it.

How have you constructed identity for your artist?

When constructing the identity for our music artist, Jordan and I felt that we wanted to challenge gender stereotypes and provide our artist with a female empowered edge. We felt that using a music website ‘MySpace’ to promote our artists single not only conformed to the Independent music genre better, but also allowed us to construct a profile for the musician with a profile image. On the profile image our artist is in a park, a stock setting for our young target audience, and she is leaning against a tree. There is greenery all around her suggesting she is free and independent with everything at her feet. The idea she is liberated makes her seem strong as she isn’t held down by any man. She is wearing a blazer and boots with a white vest. The casual nature of the clothing suggests she is very down to earth and fits in well with the Indie music genre as she makes her own fashion statement rather than follows. The blazer gives her a more dominant image as it is stereotypically warn by males. This challenges the preconceived ideas people may have about the image as its very natural and she could be seen as quite weak and girly. The camera shot is a long shot making her seem mysterious as the audience doesn’t feel as close to her because she’s distant. This reinforces her female empowerment as she isn’t open but withdrawn and this creates an enigma about her. Her facial expression is cheery and bubbly, suggesting that she has an upbeat personality which could be seen as a feminine trait.

When considering the music video, we decided to follow a multi strand narrative in which the artist links to all the separate events going on. This gives her dominance throughout the video, reinforcing her status to women audiences. We decided to use a variety of long shot to establish the setting of a street. However, there are parks and lots of greenery around linking back to the MySpace profile and furthering her female dominance as she is free. Furthermore we are going to use multiple close up shots to establish emotions and how the artist is feeling, however taking a twist on this to portray her emotions as quite sarcastic and genuinely not interested in her ex boyfriends games.
We are going to have women following her as she walks down the street, gradually joining her to unite. This idea gives her a bigger identity to audiences as she appears to be the leader, the strong woman who is empowered. Challenging gender stereotypes makes her more memorable and rebellious to audiences, especially younger viewers such as older teenagers as its something different to the norm. Also, the idea that no men appear in the video, yet the video is providing anchorage to the song about a relationship, makes the song that more powerful as the audience only sees it from women’s point of view.

Lastly, the album cover is also set outdoors in a park. However In the shot she is stood on her own playing a guitar. This challenges the gender roles of musicians as often guitarists have typically been male and instruments of the sort male dominated. The guitar suggests she has raw talent which she is going to show off without the help of anyone else as she is framed solo.
The lighting is high key to create realism which is important for our young target audience as they will take her seriously. The back of the album cover will be a mirror to the front cover to create fluency throughout and also looks quite quirky, making her seem fun. The colours are neutral, reinforcing her natural and more feminine side as we wanted to make her seem fun and free rather than strict and harsh. Her costume is a floral dress with a leather jacket and leather boots. This contrasts both sides to her, the appearance as being girly and fun but also a serious side in which she is powerful and not to be messed with. Overall she appears rebellious and appeals to modern audiences who don’t take the stereotypical male and female gender roles. Her body posture is dominating as she is stood with her feet apart, showing quite a masculine pose. However her costume and cheeky facial expression challenging the first dominating look to make her more approachable.

Deconstruct your products, video and print artefacts utilising theoretical concepts considering Narrative, Representation, Audience and Post Modernity

When constructing our album cover, we decided to feature the artist outside in greenery with natural elements such as trees and open land. We felt that by doing this we were reinforcing our feminist approach towards the songs by taking a woman outside of stock settings you would normally see her, such as at the home, and placing her in a setting of liberty. The wide space gives audiences a sense of freedom and choices automatically letting audiences know that the artist is represented as an independent woman. Her costume of a flowery dress with a leather jacket and boots gives her an edge that men may fear but women will look up to. She has elements of femininity about her because we did not want to conform to the stereotype that any women with power must be masculine and a bitch. Her floral dress makes her seem fun and bubbly, yet her iconic leather jacket makes audiences aware she hasn’t quite let her guard down. This challenges the ‘norm’ as it shows women who are powerful, are also beautiful. We felt this was a post modern approach to feminist views as it doesn’t involve trying to gain anything for women, they are independent and don’t have to run around trying to prove it. The Uses and Gratifications theory can be applied to the album cover as women who may not have the opportunity to become a single independent woman can gain something from watching and listening to the artist. They can get a sense of fulfillment from the music.
The camera shot is a long shot as we felt that the surroundings where important to the image and wanted to capture the artist in the setting so it’s easier to see she is being liberated. The copy is round and grey, making the cover seem more relaxed and fun because the song is very soothing and easy to chill out to so we felt the audience would be more attracted to this being young. The iconic guitar on the cover reinforces the powerful and independent artist as she not only looks good but is also musically talented. Defining her as a solo artist encourages the audience to want to be individual like herself as she is pictured as a hero to women. A proppian analysis of the text would show her as hero to women as she releases women from their stereotypical household duties and releases them from being reliant on men.
The video is a key part for providing anchorage to the lyrics of the song and by using an all female cast we felt this would really emphasize the narrative of the song. We used young women in the video to appeal to our young target audience, but also the problems within the song are more likely to be relevant to younger audiences over older. Yet again the costume of the artist is a floral dress with her iconic leather jacket to reflect her girly yet tough image. We felt it was important to create continuity between the album cover and the video as the cover promotes the single for the video. We used the same jacket in both to ensure this. We furthered our continuity by setting the video in an outside area, with lots of greenery. We start of with a long shot of the artist sat on steps, and gradually she walks along a path passing girls on the way and ending up in a green field with the girls following behind her. The journey becomes more and more scenic as she progresses suggesting to audiences that her freedom is becoming more and more liberated. The enigma throughout the video is where the girls who she passes on the journey go. This is established at the end in a long shot as we see the girls following the artist in the closing shot. This shows unity of the women, reinforcing the powerful message that women do not need men. The idea that these women are following her reinforces the element of her being a hero to women. Also, because the audience follow the artist while she is walking down one continuous path they feel like they are on this journey themselves, which is important for the Uses and Gratifications theory as the audience are provided with escapism. We use multiple close ups of the artists facial expression throughout to show her emotions, however where the audience expect her to feel sorrow or be upset she is smiling challenging the stereotype that women are emotional and weak.
Lastly, we decided to create a music MySpace profile for our artist so we were able to generate a persona surrounding the artist. We used images taken when the cast member playing the artist was out socializing to ensure that the young female audiences were able to relate to the artist. For example, we have a medium long shot of the artist in a pub smiling, which audiences haven’t seen on the album cover or within the music video. We felt that because we are appealing to our young, female target audience it is important to make them feel involved and like the artist is ‘one of them’ so by doing this we can establish a relationship with the audience. It will also make it easier for young girls to relate to the issues in the song if they feel they can trust the artist. It shows her softer side as we felt that she looked tough in the video and album cover so it was suggested we make sure audience see her ‘party’ side. We used a floral background on the profile to reinforce femininity but we used more masculine colours so she didn’t appear too girly. We created blogs for the artist to make her chatty and bubbly side clear to audiences and also to create as much realism as possible.

Monday, 19 October 2009

The Pitch

During the day Jordan and I presented our pitch for our musician to the group. We created a character profile for our artist and decided to give her a feminist edge, whilst making her friendly and bubbly challenging stereotypes of women and female beauty.

Character Profile
We constructed a storyboard for our music video using large pieces of sugar paper. In total we had 43 frames. However, when thinking about this we realized this was not adequate for our 3 minute clip. We followed a linear narrative where our artist walks down the street and encounters different women in separate circumstances on the way. Each seem to have been let down by a man and when they see our artist walk past she empowers them to a realization that they in fact don't need men to be happy. This reinforces the Uses and gratifications theory where by female audiences can also be liberated. In the new equilibrium established the women follow our artist into a setting of greenery symbolizing freedom.

Storyboard Part One
Storyboard Part Two
Establishing Shot of Artist
First Girl
Second Girl
Third Girl
Establishing New Equilibrium

We also displayed our ideas for our mock CD covers. We featured 4 different covers, all of her outside to show that she is in touch with nature. However, on one of the covers we had her stood by a colorful tree smiling and laughing, we felt that this did not reinforce the persona we had created for her that was:
  1. Strong willed
  2. Femininely dominate
  3. Independent
Mock CD covers
In the end we decided on a album cover of her leaning against a tree with her guitar on the floor. We thought her stance would be defensive, yet the outside setting and high key lighitng make her more down to earth and friendly. Also the outside setting would enforce that she is not restricted but is limitless as she has the whole world at her feet, along with her guitar.

We displayed our Myspace music profile where we have constructed an account for the artist Lola Riley. We provided the information such as her current music status as unsigned. We felt that these elements would make her appealing to target audiences as she is young, unique.

Myspace Profile

Friday, 10 July 2009

Assessment of research

Audiences:

We found that our target audience would mainly be from the ages 0f 16-19, both males and females. Even though we are appealing to both genders I feel that females will dominate the audience because of the female empowering nature of the genre however males will also be targeted.

We decided that we should appeal to audiences who are familiar with music channels and music programmes as Indie music is based on instrumental ability rather than vocals like you would find in a Pop song for instance.

Lastly, because of the young target audience, we felt advertisment on the TV and internet would be much more effective as older adolescents are familiar with downloading.

Institutions:

The main institutions Jordan and I felt would suit our artist and genre include...
  1. Rough Trade Records
  2. MTV 2
  3. Q Magazine
We found that Rough Trade Records is an independent record label founded in 1978. The idea that it isn't owned buy a multinational corporation such as Universal Records fits in well with the independent music genre. Artists such as The Libertines are signed meaning that Indie music is associated with the company.

MTV 2 is a channel that promotes music in the genres of Indie/Rock/Metal again reinoforcing our music genre.Its a 24 hour music channel indicating its widely avaliable to audiences.

Q magazine is a specific music magazine, often focusing on genres such as Rock/Metal/Punk/Indie and features upcoming gigs which would be sufficent promotion for our artist.

Friday, 3 July 2009

Comparable Texts

Over the past couple of weeks both inside and outside of lessons i have been analyzing my comparable products. I have looked at 6 album covers from Indie bands to help me find any generalizations and codes and conventions of Indie music covers.
I have also looked at 6 Indie music videos in which the artist is walking down the road as Jordan and I had this idea for our music video and felt that it would benefit us to see what conventions there are of this type of video.
Lastly instead of using print adverts we decided to look at Myspace, a music website because we felt it was more relevant and up to date with the genre of music we are looking at


Album Covers...
  • Overall the general conventions of the indie genre include that the font is often white (often on Jamie T's Panic Prevention)
  • The settings are simplistic and outdoors, such as parks and streets ( The Verve and Ida Maria feature these)
  • The image is dominant to the frame and the main focus of the cover, often positioned in the forefront ( The Arctic Monkeys Cover)
  • The artists costume is causal, with jeans and pumps and plain tops
  • It features iconic images to the genre, for example musical instruments, alcohol and cigarettes (The Cribs album features the artist drinking)
Advertisement...
  • Myspace is a social networking site where independent artists can upload their music for a wide range of audiences to listen to
  • It uses images, blogs, personal videos, 'About me' and allows a selection of friends to add
  • It is important as it allows unsigned artists to be found by record companies
  • It is popular with many music genres, Indie and Indie pop especially
Music Videos...
  • Within Indie music the music video provides anchorage to the lyrics ( VV Brown - Shark in the water)
  • The artist is portrayed as a Proppian hero overcoming a disruption to the narrative
  • It features multipleticks and Stones)
  • The lighting is very high key, again enforcing realism
  • The artist is often tracked throughout the video to establish the artist in the outdoor setting ( Jack panning shots, therefore we need to include these angles in our videoThere is no obvious editing, outlining the videos create realism (Jamie T - S Penate - Second, minute or hour)
  • The costumes are modern and iconic to the genre of music, they are casual yet fashionable to portray the artists images
Overall all the elements of the codes and convetions of Indie music genre I feel will help produce a generic music video for our artist as we now know what camera angles, costumes, settings, lighting etc to feature.

Wednesday, 17 June 2009

Questionnaire

Over the weekend i collected questionnaire results from 30 people ranging from the ages of 16-50. I think that the wide variety of age response helped me determine which genres appealed to which target audiences.
From the results i found that the older people i asked preffered rock and 60's genres and were able to name their favourite album covers. However, the younger generations i asked found it hard to name album covers as illegal downloading is the new culture for teenagers and therefore albums are not being brought but downloaded online.
Generally, Indie and R'n'B were the most popular genres among young people, with Indie being slightly more preffered. I do not know whether this was because of the people i chose to ask or whether it's a adequate generalization however Jordan and I have decided our genre is going to be Indie.

Friday, 12 June 2009

Draft questionnaire

In todays lesson i modified my questionnaire after realizing my draft only looked at the target demographic of 16-19 year olds. This would not give me the wide range of feedback on different genres that i needed and therefore changed it so i had a wider age group.

I also added some additional questions for example about audiences favorite music channels because when researching institutions and music television this will help me determine which channels to focus on that interest my audience the most.

Over the weekend i'm going to get feedback from around 30 people and then i will be able to research the genre and channel.